In my tutorial with Kathleen on Tuesday, she gave some suggestions to me. And then I adjusted the pattern accordingly. I told her I wanted to redo the sleeves, and she said it wasn’t a big deal as long as the model could wear them. But my obsessive perfectionism makes me look at that sleeve and struggle. So I went online and found a sleeve pattern that I thought was reasonable, made a new pattern and construct it to see the effect. In addition, the length of the sleeve was adjusted, and finally I was more satisfied.
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I spent the rest of my time reading Tyson’s book: Critical Theory Today. I want to read the whole book before writing the paper, so that I can have a relatively deep and comprehensive understanding of the object I want to analyze.